Is the following sentence correct and does it make sense?

Try your goodness out on whoever deserves

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It makes sense and is not correct

Try your goodness out on whoever deserves

I have no objection to the split infinitive "try out", although you are splitting it a long way

It should be "whomever" but Americans don't care about the dative

"… whoever deserves [it]"

The (elision? anti-paragoge?) implied pronoun is a little awkward, and not in a casual conversation way. Its omission is a little pretentious by making it sound almost anastrophe.

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