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I came across these two sentences:

  1. Today, his sculptures – which spin, tilt, and sway – belong to collections worldwide.

  2. Today, his sculptures – spin, tilt, and sway – belong to collections worldwide.

Which one would be correct? Or would they both be acceptable?

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  • You could omit which if you are talking about three sculptures, titled Spin, Tilt, and Sway. – 1006a Dec 8 '17 at 3:54
  • Another question on EL&U asks about this same test prep question. See ACT English question regarding dashes. There is actually some useful information in the comments (if I do say so myself), although both attempts at formal answers have been deleted. – Sven Yargs Dec 13 '17 at 8:32
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Why the dashes G.B? There is nothing terribly wrong with sentence number one bereft of all dashes. Though it does contain a smattering of commas. Were it a sentence of my own i might grow two:

The sculptures spin, tilt, and sway. Today his art belongs to collections worldwide.

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