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Is this sentence acceptable? It sounds correct but looks informal.

Usually, historical nonfiction works are not the most exciting books that one can read, but Jack’s surprisingly rises above the rest.

Thanks!

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  • Where's the pronoun, and what do you think makes it "informal"? I see none. The pronoun one is not being used possessively. – tchrist Aug 30 '17 at 2:00
  • You're probably asking about whether Jack's is acceptable here. Certainly 'the one written by Jack' is becoming more formal, but mixes registers incongruously (unless 'Jack' is a surname) and is clumsy. ' ... but that of Peterson ...' is more consistent. // However, informal versions are often far more acceptable than formal (and especially rarefied) versions. Acceptability is a movable feast. – Edwin Ashworth Aug 30 '17 at 7:54
  • Why the down-votes? Just want to know what's wrong. – jo99blackops Aug 30 '17 at 20:56
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Just to be clear, possessive pronouns come in two forms. The first are often called possessive adjectives or possessive determiners: my, our, your, his, her, its, and their. They function as adjectives and come before nouns: my house, his shoes, their car. The second forms are called independent or absolute possessives: mine, ours, yours, his, hers, its and theirs. They function as nouns and can stand alone as a subject or object of a verb: mine is on the table, the book is yours. (Note that none of the independent possessives mentioned above use an apostrophe to show possession).

In your case I see no possessive pronoun and nothing "informal" either. It sounds correct and it looks correct.

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