A fuller example of my problem is in the following excerpts from a little thought I'm trying to jot down. I like the way it reads; but then again... any help would be appreciated.
"I'd like to believe that were I a woman and not a man, I'd have(...)
"To allow the crooked and foolish to go unabated could very well put my own self in danger, were I a woman."
If anybody's interested I wouldn't mind posting the entire thought for grammatical as well as creative criticism.
Thanks in advanced for anybody's input.