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Is it correct to use “punctuation outside of the quotations”, or “inside?”

I've always had trouble dealing with quotes ending in question marks. Any solution has been awkward. What's the best way to use it? Examples (which are probably wrong):

  • Did you know how he asked me "how do you do?"?
  • After he said "Do I know you?", we hit him with some bricks.
  • "Fool!" he exclaimed.
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British rules more or less follow common sense logic:

When the punctuation logically belongs inside the quote, this is where you put it. Otherwise, it shall be put outside.

Example:

“Where is the milk?” he asked his cat.

See Guardian style guide & “Quotation marks” on grammar.ccc.commnet.edu.

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Here's the problem with the inside-the-quote rule. If you asking a question about a value in a data field, the question mark appears to be part of the value. For example, if you ask the question: Should the Zip Code field contain "12345?", the question mark appears to be part of the data. Data integrity would require this sentence to be: Should the Zip Code field contain "12345"? Looks funny but there you have it.

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The rule I was taught is that there is one and only one punctuation mark associated with the speech fragment, and it goes inside the quotes. It doesn't matter whether it logically belongs there or not, that's where it goes. Mercifully, it seems I was taught wrong (see all the comments below), and we get to apply common sense: if the sentence would put a "stronger" punctuation mark than is part of the quote itself immediately after the quote, it goes outside the quote marks instead. So...

  • Did you know how he asked me "how do you do?"? The final question mark is wrong; the question mark in the quotes does duty both for the quoted greeting and the sentence as a whole. Yes, that means you can't tell just from the punctuation whether just the quote or both the quote and the sentence is a question. It's usually obvious from the wording, but sometimes you might need to rephrase to eliminate ambiguity.

    In this case you also need a capital 'H' on the second "how" and a comma after "me."

  • After he said "Do I know you?", we hit him with some bricks. By the same token, the comma after the quotes is wrong; the question mark does duty for it. You do, however, need a comma after "said."

  • "Fool!" he exclaimed. Spot on.

  • An extra example to illustrate dropping the punctuation from the quote: Did you hear how he said, "The door is open"? In this case the quote isn't a question itself, so the question mark doesn't belong there, but the overall sentence is a question and needs to be marked as such.

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    Er no, it's not true that the punctuation mark always goes inside the quotes (unless you're talking only of American convention and forgot to specify). Oct 11, 2010 at 16:18
  • I'm British, and that's how I was taught to do it. It didn't matter how little sense it made, the punctuation mark properly went inside the quotes.
    – user1579
    Oct 11, 2010 at 17:08
  • you were taught wrong. Oct 11, 2010 at 19:45
  • @Rhodi: Did he say, "My name is Dave"? Moving question mark inside the quotes changes its meaning.
    – MrHen
    Apr 1, 2011 at 16:46
  • @MrHen: that's what I've always thought and preferred myself, but it's not what I was taught. I'm quite prepared to accept the wisdom here that I was taught wrong!
    – user1579
    Apr 1, 2011 at 17:20
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I cannot really answer in terms of proper, correct or official style rules but here are the basics of how to choose what to do.

  • Minimize the amount of punctuation visible. If you can eliminate a "duplicate" mark, do it.

  • When removing extraneous marks, work from the outside inward. Marks outside of quotes get hit first.

  • If at all possible, move mark to inside the quotes but never change the meaning of the quoted section.

Examples:


Did you know how he asked me "how do you do?"?

The extra '?' can be removed. Leave the internal '?' alone:

Did you know how he asked me "how do you do?"


After he said "Do I know you?", we hit him with some bricks.

This is probably controversial, but the comma is fair to remove:

After he said "Do I know you?" we hit him with some bricks.


"Fool!" he exclaimed.

This is fine.


Other examples of how I would do things:

He yelled, "I want cake!"

He asked, "Do you want cake?"

Did he ask, "Do you want cake?"

I cannot believe he said, "I do not want cake"!

Note the exclamation point outside. I am exclaiming; the fool who passed on cake was simply talking. If the cake hater was also yelling we could do this:

I cannot believe he said, "I do not want cake!"

This is slightly ambiguous with regards to my exclamation but I find it acceptable.

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