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I am trying to talk about the aesthetics of an architecture firm's work in a cover letter I am writing.

Here is the sentence:

Your beautiful interior details and furniture design that encourages material exploration and utilizes collaboration between designers, builders, and users, shows through to the gestalt of your projects.

Does this make sense?

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    That begs the question: Does any use of "gestalt" make sense. – Hot Licks Apr 17 '17 at 17:25
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    @HotLicks Raises the question. – Ricky Apr 17 '17 at 18:09
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    No, it doesn't. – Ricky Apr 17 '17 at 18:10
  • It makes sense, but you may wish to check your subject-verb agreement. On the other hand, perhaps architects don't worry too much about such things. – Mark Hubbard Apr 17 '17 at 18:18
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    Aside from the gestalt, "that" in this sentence is used as a restrictive relative and what's wanted is a non-restrictive relative--", which" – Xanne Apr 17 '17 at 21:33

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