I was reading over my partner's uni coursework before her final submission, and a paragraph she's written in the introduction was making me wonder whether it makes sense in the way that it's currently written.
Query 1:
...sources including license fees (£145.50 a year)
Should this be per year?
Query 2:
The reason why it is called public service is because
Is the 'why' necessary in this sentence? It doesn't seem to roll off the tongue as easily with it.