I was reading over my partner's uni coursework before her final submission, and a paragraph she's written in the introduction was making me wonder whether it makes sense in the way that it's currently written.
...sources including license fees (£145.50 a year)
Should this be per year?
The reason why it is called public service is because
Is the 'why' necessary in this sentence? It doesn't seem to roll off the tongue as easily with it.