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In fact, when people have a big picture when working, they tend to make less mistakes compared to the people who pay much energy on details at the very beginning ,because those people's work is not as coherent.
In the sentence above, I use “because” to explain why one group of people make less mistakes, not the reason of paying energy on details of the other group of people, how to differentiate?
I would put it this way:
People who look at the big picture when working tend to make less mistakes compared to those focused on details. A broad focus makes work more coherent.
If a sentence becomes too complex, always think about splitting it into multiple sentences. Also, try to avoid repeating yourself or including too much information that can be inferred from what you have already said.
For example, "at the very beginning" isn't really necessary to get your point across. Your sentence also uses the word "people" three times, which contributes to the confusion you described.
