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I'm having trouble writing this sentence: "Her hair was transitioning to/into stark white due to the relentless torture." Also, would there be a comma after white?

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Idiomatic usage is "becoming stark white" or "turning stark white" Also, "due to" is an adjective. Change it to owing to, because of. I.e., X is due to Y.

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