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I'd like to ask if the following sentences are have the same meaning and all of them are grammatically correct?

  1. Much to my surprise, they offered me a £4,000 scholarship.

  2. To much of the surprise of my, they offered me a £4,000 scholarship.

  3. Much of the surprise of my, they offered me a £4,000 scholarship.

  4. Much of the surprise of mine, they offered me a £4,000 scholarship.


I found some example sentences that were created using by " to much of the amazement" and I would like to ask which one is more correct when we refer to 3rd person or other people without using personal pronouns as follows.

Much of the amazement of the historians, a recently unearthed fortnightly in the extinct Arabic-Malayalam language reveals that the Muslim community in Malabar was very much concerned about the developments in different sectors of the Ottoman Empire.(original sentence)

To much of the amazement of the historians, a recently unearthed fortnightly in the extinct Arabic-Malayalam language reveals that the Muslim community in Malabar was very much concerned about the developments in different sectors of the Ottoman Empire.

Much to the amazement of the historians, a recently unearthed fortnightly in the extinct Arabic-Malayalam language reveals that the Muslim community in Malabar was very much concerned about the developments in different sectors of the Ottoman Empire.

Much to the historians' amazement, a recently unearthed fortnightly in the extinct Arabic-Malayalam language reveals that the Muslim community in Malabar was very much concerned about the developments in different sectors of the Ottoman Empire.

Another example I found on the Internet is as follows:

...Adorya Baly, who brought the late national hero Noel Lloyd back to life in her performance, much of the amazement of the audience.

...Adorya Baly, who brought the late national hero Noel Lloyd back to life in her performance, (to) much to the amazement of the audience.

...Adorya Baly, who brought the late national hero Noel Lloyd back to life in her performance, much to the audience's amazement.

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Number 1 sounds fine; numbers 2–4 are almost unintelligible.

of my should be followed by something, typically a noun. To the surprise of my family, ... would be grammatically correct, but conveys a different meaning.

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