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I find myself writing the following phrase over and over again in my thesis:

In the following subsection we largely follow the account laid out by Smith in [1].

I am looking for alternative ways to express that, in a particular subsection, I use the work of Smith and follow his account on the subject.

What are some other ways of saying this?

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    Look for synonyms of largely, if that's what you'd like to replace. Asking to rephrase the whole sentence is off-topic for ELU. Maybe you should check if it's acceptable in Writing
    – NVZ
    Aug 2, 2016 at 16:34
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    In the following subsection we draw mainly from the account given by Smith in [1]. Aug 2, 2016 at 19:37

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You could use "the [investigation/redaction/account] in this subsection is [synonymes of largely] along the lines of [the one in] Smith [1]".

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Alternative ways of saying: In the following subsection we largely follow the account laid out by Smith in [1].

In the following subsection we explore the account laid out by Smith in [1]...

or,

In the following subsection we turn to the account laid out by Smith in [1]...

or,

The account laid out by Smith in [1] is pertinent here...

or,

In the following subsection I elucidate the account laid out by Smith in [1]...

Edit in relation to comments:

Other ways of expressing "the account laid out by"

"the account articulated by..."

"the case made by..."

"the theory as discussed by..." (if it pertains to a theory)

"the contribution of..."

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  • +1 This is a useful response, I don't know why someone downvoted it. What about alternative ways of saying "the account laid out by" ? Aug 2, 2016 at 18:45
  • What is the subject?
    – Gary
    Aug 2, 2016 at 18:49
  • It's an undergraduate math thesis, @Gary. Aug 3, 2016 at 6:02
  • @iwriteonbananas have edited to give you some ideas.
    – Gary
    Aug 3, 2016 at 9:20
  • Fantastic, much appreciated, @Gary. Aug 3, 2016 at 11:58

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