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Is the following sentence correct?

Just like a girl who has crushes on good looking people, I have crushes on good looking people.

If I omit the "who has a crush on good looking people," in the first clause, then I will just be compared to any girl. So does my sentence make any sense?

  • This is a request for writing advice (off topic). For more information about this site please see english.stackexchange.com/help/on-topic – MetaEd May 6 '16 at 13:10
  • "Like a girl who has crushes on good looking people, I too fall for good looking people." (or I too fall for such people). – MorganFR May 6 '16 at 13:11
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    Just like a commentator who makes comments, I am making a comment. – Dan Bron May 6 '16 at 13:12

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