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Should I use a comma before and after "it seems" in the following sentence?

"The reason to the financial crisis, it seems, is the greediness of bankers."

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    Personally, I avoid the word "it" when it doesn't actually have an antecedent. To make your sentence less inexact and more concrete I suggest you drop the "it". Also, instead of the word "to", you should use the word "for" (The reason FOR the financial crisis . . .). Don – rhetorician Apr 19 '16 at 16:33
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I suggest you reword the sentence as follows:

I think the reason for the financial crisis is the greediness of bankers.

Or,

I think the cause of the financial crisis . . ..

Or,

In my way of thinking, the reason for the financial crisis . . ..

Or,

I suggest the reason for the financial crisis is . . ..

Or,

According to Milton Friedman, the reason for the financial crisis . . ..

Or,

In my humble opinion, the reason for the financial crisis is . . ..

Or,

From my perspective, the reason for the financial crisis is . . ..

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