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In dialogue, when a character is asking for another's name by saying, 'Mister...?' (expecting the other character to answer with their surname), is it written:

'Mister...?' or 'Mister?'

The first feels better, as it includes the implied gap, waiting to be filled by the answer.

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    I prefer "Mister...?" . It hints that the character speaking is expecting a response. – BiscuitBoy Jan 26 '16 at 11:00
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The ellipsis indicates that the speaker's voice is trailing off. If that's your intended effect, then use it. It is not required.

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To add to BiscuitBoy's and jimm101's responses, including the ellipsis is preferable as, since the reader cannot hear and comprehend written dialogue, it hints that the character wants a response; the ellipsis leaves the sentence incomplete.

Without the ellipsis, "Mister?" could be comprehended as someone simply wanting to grab the person's attention in a similar way to "Sir?".

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