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I'm working on the website for a theater that teaches improv classes and sketch classes, and also features improv shows and sketch shows.

The front page of the website lists: "Improv and Sketch Classes and Shows," which sounds okay, but doesn't strike me as particularly clear or well-put.

Is there a succinct way to express this 2x2 idea, or can anyone suggest a concise way to write around this idea?

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    At the very least a comma between the pairs would help. It's arguably incorrect to use a semicolon, but it would be clear what you mean. Even a line break could work if you're laying out something akin to a title.
    – Chris H
    Commented Jan 11, 2016 at 7:09
  • Actually, a line break works really well, thank you!
    – Michael K
    Commented Jan 11, 2016 at 7:24

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Classes and Shows in both Improv and Sketches?

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It would be clearer to add an extra word to avoid unduly linking the terms between the two ands.

Classes and Shows about Improv and Sketch

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I would make a title and subtitle.

Improv and Sketch. Our [offer of] Classes and Shows

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