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√ When Martha screamed "Fire!", her neighbor called 911. {Should there be a comma after "screamed"? Is the comma placed correctly after "Fire!"?}

√ When Jake asked "Where's the bathroom?", Sheila pointed to the outhouse. {Should there be a comma after "asked"? Is the comma placed correctly after "bathroom?"?}

Do you agree with the punctuation in both sentences!

Thank you.

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You don't need commas after "screamed" or "asked."

However, I'm a little confused by the commas you are using. I'm pretty sure they should be inside the quotes, not following them. In fact, I think both sentences would be OK with no commas at all...

When Martha screamed "Fire!" her neighbor called 911.

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Martha's neighbor called 911 when she screamed "Fire!"

See some of the examples here.

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