I said the error was A, because it should be how to preserve right? But apparently that is not the error, I cannot seem to find any other errors.
Which one is it?
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Could it be perhaps that they wanted "while becoming" to be rewritten as "while she became," thus maintaining the original tense and again clarifying the subject?