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I am having trouble figuring out if any of the following sentences is grammatically correct:

(A) People perceive him as manipulative, and therefore do not trust him.

(B) People perceive him as manipulative, and therefore not trusting him.

(C) People perceive him as manipulative, therefore not trusting him.

I understand the "and" is a conjunction and generally connects two independent clauses, but what about "and therefore"? If "and therefore" functions as a conjunction, then (A) would be incorrect because "do not trust him" is not an independent clause. Is this correct?

(B) and (C) also look suspicious to me, but I can't explain why.

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Therefore is defined in [Merriam-Webster] as:

[Adverb] for that reason : because of that

Therefore, it is not a conjunction which doesn't require a coordinate conjunction such as "and", "but", etc. In otherwords, you need to use a conjunction or semi-colon before therefore to complete a sentence.

People perceive him as manipulative, and therefore (people) do not trust him.

The above sentnece is the only one which is grammatically correct as there is "and" as a conjunction and "people" is omitted as it is repeated. "(people) do not trust him" is an independent clause.

Or:

People perceive him as manipulative; therefore, they do not trust him.

In (B) and (C), they don't work as "and therefore not trusting him" and "therefore not trusting him" are not independent clauses.

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  • Thank you for the answer! Wouldn't (C) be correct since "therefore" is an adverb as you have pointed out? Since I am not using "and" in (C), I don't think I need an independence clause after the comma, right? To me "not trusting him" seems like some additional information which describes "People". – HNG Oct 25 '15 at 4:03
  • @HNG Some people call "therefore, however, etc." a "conjunction adverb." The reason is that it is different from normal adverbs. It cannot be used in a "participial construction", which means it has to lead a clause where there must be a subject and a verb. – user140086 Oct 25 '15 at 4:24
  • You need parallel verb forms. The first way is already covered in (A). The other way, using participle form, turns the whole thing into a noun phrase: "[People perceiving him as manipulative, and therefore not trusting him]---- [do X]. – Brian Hitchcock Oct 25 '15 at 7:35
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I believe that a comma should appear before the word and, and after the word therefore, because after the word therefore, there is a soft pause. A soft pause usually indicates that a comma should be used after the soft pause in a sentence. Here is how I believe the sentence should be written: "People perceive him as manipulative, (soft pause) and therefore, (soft pause) do not trust him."

I am guessing that I am probably wrong about this.

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