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My passion, however, is art, and I try to see as many exhibits as possible.

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Yes, your comma placement is correct.

You need a comma before the and because it is a coordinate conjunction joining two independent clauses. The two parts of the sentence are complete sentences on their own, and when independent clauses are joined by a coordinate conjunction (like and, but, or, etc.) you need a comma before the conjunction.

However is an interjection here and also needs to be set off by commas.

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I think that's correct, but to reduce the number of commas, maybe you could say: "My passion is art, however, and I try to see as many exhibits as possible."

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