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The importance of Internet access grows each day, correspondingly, web content accessibility too becomes equally important to ensure it meets the needs of users with disabilities.

correspondingly - connecting word, agreement/addition/similarity.

I would just like this confirmed. Thanks in advance.

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Even dropping the 'too' leaves problems. A comma splice and a false comparison (surely access to both is equally important; both needs are increasing in parallel).

The importance of Internet access grows each day; the importance of web content accessibility, to ensure that the needs of users with disabilities are met, grows correspondingly.

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Using correspondingly in that way is fine. But if you include it you do not need too as it is duplicatory, though in a slightly different sense.

I would also place a comma or perhaps semi-colon after important.

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  • I realized that a while ago, the "too" was a small mistake. Thanks for helping me out. I am glad I confirmed that my grammar skills are still up-to-date.
    – John Smith
    Jun 16, 2015 at 9:40

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