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I have been preparing to IELTS test and currently I need to write a thank you letter to my friend, because she agreed to take care of my pet.
So I've come up with this:
Thank you so much for saying "yes" to take care of my cat while I will be away.
But it seems to me too formal. What is the natural way to say that?
What is the natural way to say it?
"while I'm away" is more natural than "while I will be away". However, I think, it can be skipped, since you both know the circumstances, and adding it may sound formal and make the sentence lengthy.
(Being spontaneous makes what you say 'natural'. Say it aloud a couple of times and you'll know how to do this. I did.)
Here're some alternatives, just to help :
And, you can always add a little extra by saying: "You will receive a lot of cat-love". Or "Don't steal his (or her) heart while I'm away".
Replace "look after my cat" with "cat-sit" (compare with babysit). This is a more informal term for the same thing.
Replace "while I will be away" with "while I'm gone." More idiomatic.
If you want to go for "cute", you can always write the letter as if it were the cat writing it (even with bad spelling and grammar), and add a quick postscript with "PS - Seriously though, thanks a bunch!".
