"The rise of computer technologies and networking is due to collective action similar to that of other social movements, such as the environmental movement, the anti-tobacco movement or the women's movement, for example."
- In terms of traditional grammar, is it technically wrong to say "those" instead of "that"? 2. If so, is it still wrong even in colloquial situations?
- Are there other errors or slight incoherency from the viewpoint of a native speaker? FYI since I'm not a native, I would very much like a response from a fluent native speaker.