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Here is the title: Clean your vessel & everything on it in a single session!

  1. Clean your vessel
    & everything on it
    in a single session!

  2. Clean your vessel &
    everything on it in
    a single session!

Which is correct? Both versions have lines of about the same length. How do I choose between them?

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    I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because it is about design, not language. There is no ‘correct’ here: you can break/wrap a title anywhere you want—in fact, with titles (if they’re big, main titles that are graphically styled), you can even wrap in places where normal rules of hyphenation would not allow wrapping (like wrapping the title Inspirations as INS|PIR|ATI|ONS). – Janus Bahs Jacquet Apr 1 '15 at 12:18
  • I may have inadvertently made it a design question in my edit. My purpose was to make the question about rules, rather than just "which is right" (proof-reading). If the question can be improved to move it further away from proof-reading, I'll be happy. – Andrew Leach Apr 1 '15 at 12:21
  • You should show some research into the matter. Knowing what the purpose of a title is might lead you to your answer. That might be a direction you can go with your research. – Canis Lupus Apr 1 '15 at 14:38
  • I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because April Fools. – tchrist Apr 1 '15 at 21:30

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