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I'm having trouble with this sentence:

"I possess what in spanish we call ganas, the desire, to attain a graduate degree."

I think it's clear what I'm trying to say, but it sounds wrong. It feels like I'm saying ganas means "the desire to attain a gruduate degree" instead of just "the desire".

What is the correct way to write this?

Thanks!

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    With the commas it is unambiguous. – fdb Dec 1 '14 at 0:11
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    It's clearer with dashes: I possess what in spanish we call ganas—the desire—to attain a graduate degree. – Peter Shor Dec 1 '14 at 0:14
  • spanish should be Spanish. – Drew Dec 1 '14 at 0:19
  • I wonder why you bother to include this text at all: "what in spanish we call ganas". The question is fine, but I wonder why you don't just say "I would like to obtain a graduate degree". Or if ganas is particularly strong, then "I want very much to...." – Drew Dec 1 '14 at 0:22
  • Yeah, we have a word in English for desire. – 1252748 Dec 2 '14 at 23:13
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I would use parenthesis

I possess what in spanish we call ganas (a strong desire) to attain a graduate degree.

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