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I am trying to find a better expression for this:

I mean that the workshop is about the sharing of conversation with company people so to improve company

closed as off-topic by Kristina Lopez, Chenmunka, bib, Mari-Lou A, choster Sep 16 '14 at 23:07

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  • Can you add some more detail to your question, and perhaps try expressing the sentence in 2-3 more ways? That'll help us identify the clearest wording. – Dan Bron Sep 16 '14 at 14:29
  • "The purpose of the workshop is to improve the company following discussion with the company's employees". – Ste Sep 16 '14 at 14:31
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    This question appears to be off-topic because it is probably better suited for the English Language Learners site. – Kristina Lopez Sep 16 '14 at 14:38
  • You should at least start with something that makes sense, then we can try to suggest better ways to say it. – Barmar Sep 16 '14 at 14:48
  • Actually, i want to ask to you of makes sense, but i am learner. so my english will be broken and not have makes sense. – Carter Sep 16 '14 at 14:52
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Let us assume future tense.

We are going to have a workshop. The workshop will enable company people to collaborate and create improvements for the company.

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