I am writing a sentence whose word order and punctuation has put me in a fix. Can I get some opinions on whether the construction is correct, grammatically?
Ask him what becomes of the dogs he claims to have rehabilitated on the show after the show ends and he leaves them in the hands of their ignorant owners.
The main problem I have with the sentence is that it a) doesn't sound natural and b) is too long, without any pause. If you could point out the mistakes or, better yet, improve the phrasing, I'd be very grateful.