0

Does the way I wrote the following sentence make sense?

The story begins with Olaf speaking about his experiences and perception of life.

closed as off-topic by Hellion, aedia λ, RyeɃreḁd, Mari-Lou A, choster Apr 21 '14 at 2:01

This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:

  • "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Hellion, aedia λ, Mari-Lou A, choster
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.

0

It does make sense, but you could also say:

The story begins with Olaf relating his experiences and perceptions of life.

0

"Cool story, Hansel!"

Yes, it makes sense. Although I might change it to say: "experiences and perceptions of life." (That way experiences and perceptions are both plural.)

Not the answer you're looking for? Browse other questions tagged or ask your own question.