How can this be better expressed?
In respect of Anna's written wishes, there will be no funeral.
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1With respect for..., Respecting..., Out of respect for..., and the answers below.– anongoodnurseMar 15, 2014 at 22:50
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2Hi user69013. What do you mean by "better expressed?" What do you think is wrong with it currently?– nxxMar 15, 2014 at 22:53
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1@nxx: I think fairly obviously the "problem" with OP's version is that usually when a statement starts with "In respect of X", it means what follows is a statement about X, not what follows is a statement reflecting recognition and respect for X.– FumbleFingersMar 15, 2014 at 22:58
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2Sure, but that is not necessarily what the OP thinks is "wrong". The question lacks details and explanation.– nxxMar 15, 2014 at 23:02
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There are several good ways to express the thought. Here are a few:
We will respect Anna's written wishes and forgo a funeral.
We will respect Anna's written wish to forgo a funeral.
As Anna requested in writing, there will be no funeral.
At Anna's written request there will be no funeral.
To respect Anna's wishes, no funeral will be held.
There will be no funeral per Anna's written request.
