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When we hear about eating disorders, such as binge eating, anorexia, or bulimia, I usually don't know about it.

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    Nothing wrong with the commas, but the sentence doesn’t make much sense. Why would we usually not know when we hear about eating disorders? – Janus Bahs Jacquet Nov 24 '13 at 23:09
  • @JanusBahsJacquet Uh sorry my bad about the logic. But yeah since I don't know about it then I'll change we to I. – puretppc Nov 24 '13 at 23:12
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    With the edit, it makes even less sense! Now you don’t know it when someone tells us about eating disorders. Note that ‘it’ here refers back to hearing about eating disorders. If you want to refer to the eating disorders themselves, you have to use ‘them’. – Janus Bahs Jacquet Nov 24 '13 at 23:19
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The commas are fine, but the sentence itself needs a little editing. Try

When we hear about eating disorders, such as binge eating, anorexia, or bulimia, we often do not understand much about them.

  • Uh yeah I edited. – puretppc Nov 24 '13 at 23:14

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