I wrote the following line in my thesis acknowledgment, while talking about my supervisor who carefully edited my thesis.
If this thesis reads uncluttered and effective, it would be for his elaborate, meticulous feedback.
I am not sure if this sentence is grammatically right (reads - would). Also does it make a claim that my thesis is so and so, or rightly conveys the conditional context?
My brain became completely numb after two months of writing. Can anyone please edit this sentence for me?