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Is it correct to say "You which know the secret of my heart"? If yes, what is the difference from "You who know .... " ?

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No, it's not correct to say "you which know". Your second sentence, "you who know", is OK, but clumsy.

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  • Thank you very much for your help. How could I express the sentence : "You WHO know the secrets of my heart, give me a shining smile, one more time" in a better way? It's a song... Thanks! May 30, 2013 at 13:50
  • In a song, it's OK. But nobody talks like that. Normally relative clauses do not modify pronouns -- relative clauses are to identify nouns, and pronouns are for nouns that are already identified. May 30, 2013 at 13:55
  • you THAT now? better or not than you WHO know? Jun 5, 2013 at 14:31
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Adding which makes "You which know the secret of my heart" a sentence fragment.

This would be the proper way of writing it:

You, which know the secret of my heart, verb blah blah.

Note the added commas. Also, using "which" instead of "who" is archaic. That's probably a quote from the King James Bible.

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  • Hello, RonJohn. I'd be as happy using 'You who know the secret of my heart ....' as 'You, who know the secret of my heart, ....' The commaed version is clearly non-restrictive, the commaless version arguably restrictive (you, a subset of those people who know the secret of my heart, ....) But a flowery, archaic example. // The 'which' for 'who' would be unacceptable in modern writing not aiming at a historical flavour. Your penultimate sentence answers the question. Can you add a link to an (attributed) supporting reference covering the change (or at least a couple of examples)? Mar 31 at 11:48

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