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What sounds more natural? This:

Her body was warm, like the one of a sunbathing cat.

or this?

Her body was warm, like a sunbathing cat.

(I'm open to other suggestions).

EDIT

Here's some context:

She put her glass down on the floor and wrapped her arms around me. Her body was warm, like the one of a sunbathing cat.

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    like that of a – Kris Apr 11 '13 at 14:08
  • @janoChen Oh you are right. But I guess using 's at the end is practically the same thing. – janoChen Apr 11 '13 at 14:10
  • It's not the same thing -- your question was "what sounds more natural", right? – Kris Apr 11 '13 at 14:11
  • @Kris OK, you're right. Which one sounds more natural to you? – janoChen Apr 11 '13 at 14:15
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None of those work. You just want:

  • Her body was warm, like a sunbathing cat’s.
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Her body was warm, like the fur of a sunbathing cat.

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