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First question, and apologies if I word it awkwardly.

Someone posted a chart of emotions. At the top were the words, "As a writer, this has proved to be a truly valuable chart." Here's the link: https://www.facebook.com/writerscircle/photos/a.469562786290.301523.110046421290/10153994207441291/?type=3&theater

Now, I know that's wrong. The chart's not a writer. But I'm flailing about for the correct terms to describe WHY it's wrong. Lack of agreement between a prepositional phrase and sentence subject? Or...?

Could someone supply the technical terms for what's wrong with that sentence?

Thanks in advance.

Cyn

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There are several terms that are used for the problem exemplified in your sentence. The Oxford Dictionary of English Grammar (p251) calls such constructions misrelated, and defines them as follows:

Not attached grammatically to the word or phrase intended by the meaning, either joined to the wrong word or phrase, or completely unattached.

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Although terms such as misrelated, dangling, hanging, unattached, etc. are most commonly applied to participles, verbless phrases can also be misrelated.

The offending misrelation in your sentence is a prepositional phrase whose complement is the noun writer. The reader will expect writer to be the antecedent of the pronoun which follows it as the subject of the main clause: this. But this refers to the valuable chart and is hence misrelated to writer, causing momentary ambiguity.

Steven Pinker in his recent style guide The Sense of Style (2014) has some good advice on this issue under the heading dangling modifiers (p208-211). He writes:

The rule decrees that the implied subject of the modifier ... must be identical to the overt subject of the main clause. Most copy editors would recast the main clause, supplying it with a subject to which the modifier can be properly fastened.

In your case this would mean recasting the main clause so that its subject is a personal pronoun: I, she, we, etc.

Pinker goes on to state:

The decision of whether to recast a sentence to align its subject with the subject of the modifier is a matter of judgment, not grammar. A thoughtlessly placed dangler can confuse the reader or slow her down, and occasionally it can lure her into a ludicrous interpretation. Also, even if a dangler is in no danger of being misinterpreted, enough readers have trained themselves to spot danglers that a writer who leaves it incurs the risk of being judged as slovenly. So in formal styles, it's not a bad idea to keep an eye open for them and to correct the obtrusive ones.

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The word you're looking for is dangling, applied to constructs that are nonsensical when they're applied to the syntactic element that they're associated with. In

As a writer, that has proved to be a truly valuable chart.

the introductory phrase has to refer to the subject, which turns out to be the relative pronoun that, which has chart as its postcedent. But as you pointed out, charts can't be writers. The sense is clearly

As a writer, I found that the chart proved truly valuable.

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