Timeline for What's good wording for "souls of people who died of injustice"?
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| Mar 11, 2021 at 4:16 | comment | added | DWKraus | @Tam Le If dead is the objection here, how about the unjustly slain? Unjustly disembodied (which implies souls)? | |
| Mar 10, 2021 at 10:13 | comment | added | Tam Le | In your suggestion, you also replace 'full of' with 'filled with'. It seems to me that 'filled with' imply the restriction of existence space to within the lance's body itself. The lance is the container of souls. I believe that the lance is the attached rather than a containment. | |
| Mar 10, 2021 at 10:06 | comment | added | Tam Le |
I feel quite strongly agree with the adjective 'unjustly'. However dead could be refer to the physical body. There are instances of weapons forged from bones, blood in literature and history. In case of epic, there are case where the weapon is literally a god itself. Maybe "unjustly died souls"? died seems redundant? Without died it seems like omittance.
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| Mar 10, 2021 at 9:17 | history | answered | smithkm | CC BY-SA 4.0 |