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| Jun 26, 2020 at 23:29 | comment | added | user389465 | Thank you for your wishes. I'm such a slow reader that though I'm trying to read as much and as various texts as I can, it might take me many years even to grasp the least sense of proper styles, but I'll keep reading. Thanks. HK | |
| Jun 25, 2020 at 4:41 | comment | added | auspicious99 | @user389465 I also prefer the first one, but it is subjective, so some people may prefer the second one (as it is shorter). Sense of style can be improved by reading widely, and you will be gradually internalising the patterns as you do that. Best wishes! | |
| Jun 25, 2020 at 4:19 | comment | added | user389465 | >auspicious99 Thank you so much for the two rephrases and I especially like the first one. I'm just wondering if that could improve the cohesion or flow of the rhythm in the whole passage...I wish I had a better sense of styles not to mention much higher competence in English. | |
| Jun 24, 2020 at 9:20 | history | answered | auspicious99 | CC BY-SA 4.0 |