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I don't read the sentences as completely equivalent, the sentence (A) expresses a dependence on how genuine he feels he can be and both vulnerability and strength, while sentence (B) expresses a relation between vulnerability more clearly than it does to strength.

I read the first sentence as ability to be more genuine = more vulnerability + more strength.

The second sentence as ability to be more genuine = more vulnerability + he will take singular action to be stronger.

If you would want to imply the same meaning, I would use.:

As he feels that he can be more genuine with you, he'll be free to express more of his vulnerability and will become stronger because of it.

I don't read the sentences as completely equivalent, the sentence (A) expresses a dependence on how genuine he feels he can be and both vulnerability and strength, while sentence (B) expresses a relation between vulnerability more clearly than it does to strength.

I read the first sentence as ability to be more genuine = more vulnerability + more strength.

The second sentence as ability to be more genuine = more vulnerability + he will take singular action to be stronger.

If you would want to imply the same meaning, I would use.

As he feels that he can be more genuine with you, he'll be free to express more of his vulnerability and will become stronger because of it.

I don't read the sentences as completely equivalent, the sentence (A) expresses a dependence on how genuine he feels he can be and both vulnerability and strength, while sentence (B) expresses a relation between vulnerability more clearly than it does to strength.

I read the first sentence as ability to be more genuine = more vulnerability + more strength.

The second sentence as ability to be more genuine = more vulnerability + he will take singular action to be stronger.

If you would want to imply the same meaning, I would use:

As he feels that he can be more genuine with you, he'll be free to express more of his vulnerability and will become stronger because of it.

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I don't read the sentences as completely equivalent, the sentence (A) expresses a dependence on how genuine he feels he can be and both vulnerability and strength, while sentence (B) expresses a relation between vulnerability more clearly than it does to strength.

I read the first sentence as ability to be more genuine = more vulnerability + more strength.

The second sentence as ability to be more genuine = more vulnerability + he will take singular action to be stronger.

If you would want to imply the same meaning, I would use.

As he feels that he can be more genuine with you, he'll be free to express more of his vulnerability and will become stronger because of it.