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Feb 28, 2016 at 17:03 comment added lynn Interestingly, if the inner-most noun of such a three-level embedding is I, then the sentence can be quite readable. The cars people I hate drive are loud.
Mar 23, 2015 at 18:53 comment added WinnieNicklaus +1 for getting the whole point of the sentence, which was not to express the thought most clearly but to demonstrate a fact about our language faculties.
Mar 23, 2015 at 15:06 comment added Marc van Leeuwen @user21820: If it really bugs you, and if you find the result more readable, you may take out the comma that precedes "that". I indicated the restrictive use of the clause is by using "that" rather than "which" there, though I am aware that opinions differ on this point. My commas are used just to mark a pause and delimit that clause, and I'll do that when I feel it helps reading a sentence, regardless of any grammatical rules.
Mar 23, 2015 at 14:35 comment added user21820 Unfortunately, your transformed sentence now says something completely different because the relative clause has become an unrestrictive one implying that all women are as described, while the original did not.
Mar 23, 2015 at 10:08 history answered Marc van Leeuwen CC BY-SA 3.0