Is it correct to use "act quickly" and "gives you" in the following sentence?
Xpto tracks xyz bounces. It gives you real-time statistics and details so you can act quickly.
Is it correct to use "act quickly" and "gives you" in the following sentence?
Xpto tracks xyz bounces. It gives you real-time statistics and details so you can act quickly.
So far as translations into idiomatic English go, that's not bad at all. For American English, anyway, it's fine.
I would say it's reasonable in a grammatic sense, but a couple of synonyms might better convey your message. Maybe something like:
It provides real-time statistics allowing you to respond rapidly to [insert whatever you're responding to].
I think that everything in the sentence you stated you is grammatically correct.
However, I think you could reduce it to one sentence if you are interested.
Xpto tracks xyz bounces, and provides real-time statistics and details so you can act quickly.