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| location | Kingston, Canada | |
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Apr 13 |
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What is the “, gerund” sentence called, and how can I improve it? Thanks for this information. I agree that they are all grammatical, valid sentences, and in most cases the intended meaning can be extracted. But The danger of ambiguity is what I don't like. |
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Apr 13 |
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What is the “, gerund” sentence called, and how can I improve it? @David I guess my point is that the first sentence is ambiguous. It can be parsed either way: (1) groups operate as focal points and groups create, or (2) groups operate as focal points, and focal points create a sense of community. I realize now that the reason I dislike this sentence structure is because of this ambiguity. |
