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Throughout designing my game, I drew many concept pictures, but I would often go onto the Internet to search for images and videos of games that were currently on the market in order to compare them to the type of product I was aiming to create. When designing my game, I drew many (of my own) concept pictures. But I would also go onto the Internet ...


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It's way, way, way too long. And, you are babbling on about nothing. Just DIRECTLY SAY what you're trying to say. A lot of it is just crap. You don't have to explain you were looking for "images and videos" (what else would you be looking for?) Since, say, 20 years now you don't have to explain "on the internet!" (How else would you do it? an extranet? ...


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Technically speaking, your sentence isn't incorrect. However, you could make it shorter and more readable by cutting out redundant expressions. For instance, "Throughout," "in order to," "would often go onto," and "was aiming to" are examples of these expressions. By editing them out of your writing, you make the sentence easier to read. Example: I ...


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Throughout the design of my project, I would often go to the Internet to search for images and videos of games that are currently on the market. I would use these images to compare them to the type of product I was aiming to create. OR While I drew many concept pictures, I often felt is helpful to go to the internet and look at images of video games that ...


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I understand it to mean that a person is guilty of the same thing she is accusing another person of, often in greater degrees than the accused, and so has no right to be derogatory to him. I like Wikipedia's synopsis: "As generally understood, the person accusing (the "pot") is understood to share some quality with the target of their accusation (the ...



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