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Jack thinks he's responsible for killing his mother and thus for his uncle’s conceived hatred towards him.

Here, I mean to say that Jack assumes his uncle hates him (of course, Jack is sure, but it may not be the truth). And I think it'd be incorrect to say "...and thus for his uncle's assumed hatred towards him." Is conceived also incorrect?

I tried looking for other sentences that use conceive similarly, but those sentences seem to be using conceive to say hatred was formed.

Really, my goal is to say "...and thus for his uncle's hatred towards him, though Jack only assumes his uncle hates him--his uncle truly does not." Or something along those lines. I'm trying to make this sentence more concise by using conceived this way, but am not sure if this is the right approach. Suggestions?

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Can you reword such that your use of conceived better indicates 'apparent genesis of'? i.e.,

The act that leads Jack to believe he killed his mother, conceives in his Uncle a hatred...?

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My problem with this is that it doesn't indicate that Jack's uncle's hatred is only conceived by Jack. So his uncle doesn't really hate him. I'm trying to use conceive as in "to hold as an opinion; think; believe" –  Blue Jan 14 '13 at 21:17
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OED says this under conceived (past participle adjective)...

Admitted into, or originated in, the mind; imagined, thought of, etc.: see the verb.

As @Blue comments, the sentence itself probably needs rephrasing whether the specific word is conceived/assumed/perceived/imagined/whatever, since structurally it would seem the "assuming mind" being referenced is that of the uncle. But logic suggests it's probably supposed to be Jack's.

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Ah, a different opinion. Well, I've literally spent the last 20 minutes trying to reword the sentence and I believe it isn't within my capability right now. If anyone has any suggestions, I would be eternally grateful, but for now, I think I'll just change it entirely. –  Blue Jan 14 '13 at 0:17
    
@Blue: I'd do that. But I think the problem is if you switch it to anything like "and thus he imagines his uncle hates him," still in the same sentence, there's a certain implication that this imaginary hatred is equally or even more important to Jack than the fact that he thinks he caused his mother's death. Which seems unlikely, whatever the rest of the context. I'd put off mentioning the "conceit" (OED: a conception, notion, idea, thought; obsolete) until you start a new sentence. –  FumbleFingers Jan 14 '13 at 2:05
    
Well, the main point I'm trying to get across with this sentence is that he thinks his uncle hates him, which is obviously bad, because this misconception causes him to have an even worse misconception (that he killed his mother). The poor relationship between the two is the main focus though. I ended up just making the sentence "Jack believes he is responsible for the death of his mother and that his uncle despises him for this reason." Not satisfied with it, but better than the original sentence I struggled so much with. –  Blue Jan 14 '13 at 21:13
    
@Blue: If that's what you meant, I think you really need a rewrite. It would never occur to me to suppose that the reason Jack thinks he caused his mother's death is because [he thinks] his uncle hates him. To me, your "and thus" implies precisely the opposite in terms of cause and effect. –  FumbleFingers Jan 14 '13 at 21:41
    
Alright, would a sentence such as this remove all doubt to my meaning?: "Jack holds himself responsible for his mother’s death and believes that his uncle does as well, which he conceives as the reason for his uncle's hatred." –  Blue Jan 14 '13 at 22:04
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Try perceived instead of conceived.

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@blue, "perceived" would be concise. –  Kristina Lopez Jan 13 '13 at 23:52
    
@KristinaLopez so would it be correct to say, "Jack thinks he's responsible for killing his mother and thus for his uncle’s perceived hatred towards him." Or does this sentence require some rewording? Would there be any confusion as to who is perceiving the hatred? –  Blue Jan 13 '13 at 23:56
    
@Blue, the sentence you just used in the comment above is perfectly clear to me with no confusion that he, himself, is responsible for his uncle's hatred of him (which, of course, without confirmation from the uncle, must remain his perception for now). –  Kristina Lopez Jan 14 '13 at 0:08
    
Thank you, helped me immensely. –  Blue Jan 14 '13 at 0:14
    
There's no real justification for switching to perceived unless OP is writing for people with limited knowledge of English. Personally, I think conception is a more appropriate term, since Jack has obviously created this imaginary hatred entirely within his own mind. It's not something that he's perceived with his [distorted] senses. But if any "attributive" adjective is inserted between uncle's and hatred, unavoidably it will grammatically associate with the uncle, not Jack. The fact that we know what the writer means doesn't make it "right". –  FumbleFingers Jan 14 '13 at 2:18
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No. I can't find any such usage that's valid, nor does "conceive" show up as a synonym for "assume" in the free online thesaurus. What's wrong with "assumed" when you mean "assumed"?

How I might structure it-- there are scads of ways:

Jack thinks he's responsible for killing his mother, and that his uncle's knowledge of this has caused his uncle to hate him. However, Uncle Shloim later reveals that this is not the case, by cooking Jack a delicious, unpoisoned bass.

Conciseness is nice, but it ain't everything.

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Thanks for the creative example! I think I'll use it. I know conciseness isn't everything, but my teacher stressed that I need to work on being more concise, so I'm trying really hard to right now as I'm writing my essay... I feel like it's detracting from my work (as shown in my attempt at this messed up sentence), but oh well. I digress. –  Blue Jan 13 '13 at 23:36
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