He procured a proper way to fix his relationship.
He thought of a proper way to fix his relationship.
Are those equivalent? Is the use of "procure" here unnatural and weird? Or does it work well?
Are those equivalent? Is the use of "procure" here unnatural and weird? Or does it work well? |
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No, they are not equivalent. |
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I've always understood "procure" to mean to buy, get, or obtain. Like, "I procured a new car" or "We procured some pencils from the supply room." In that sense I wouldn't say "He procured a way to fix the relationship." He didn't buy it or get it anywhere, he just ... invented ... it. But upon reading your question I looked the word up on thefreedictionary.com and they give as definition #2, "to bring about; effect" with the example "procure a solution to a knotty problem". I have never heard or seen this usage. But that does seem quite similar to your example. So I guess, according to this dictionary anyway, your usage may be valid. Still, I think most English-speakers would consider it odd. Unless you have some real reason to use the word in this context -- you want a rhyme or you want to parallel it with the same word in the previous sentence or something -- I'd just use a different word, like "thought of" or "devised". |
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It is odd to use procure in that way in modern English. According to Oxford English Dictionary (OED):
And it is most often used in the sense of to obtain, for example:
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It depends on what you're trying to say ultimately, I think procure is valid in use here, but the two sentences have a completely different thrust to them and so you'd need to pick which focus you'd prefer. They're not equivalent (as in, drop in replacements for each other) in my thoughts however.
Just to get rid of the ambiguity/common usage of procure as 'to get' (procurement orders and suchlike), consider the two sentences with the gun from @MikeM made explicit:
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If you think of procure as meaning to bring about, then in the first, he's decided already on a plan of action, and the gun is the tool that he's going to use. In the second, the gun might feature in the "proper way" that's being thought of but it could also be just a memory trigger. All that's strongly implied is that the gun is a factor in his thoughts. |
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