Which one is the right sentence for a paper?
We believe that our method can be an informed choice to use as starter program for...
We believe that our method can be an informed choice to be used as starter program for...
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Which one is the right sentence for a paper?
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Both sentences are grammatically and semantically acceptable (with the minor quibbles, how can a method be a choice? and, how is a method a program?), but both are clumsy. Instead say (eg)
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Although both are syntactically and semantically correct, active (voice) is more vivid and thus more noticed in paper. |
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The passive version I think is awkward or even ungrammatical because the general construction being employed requires a transitive verb. The suggestion usually found in style manuals to avoid the passive is irrelevant here. Why do I think so? Let's call the construction we are dealing with the "Triumph insult comic dog construction," recalling the highly memorable sentence:
Basically, there is a main copula clause where the copula complement is a noun phrase modified by some value-indicating adjective, viz., good, great, well-informed. A clausal complement of the formula
In the preceding examples, the complement clause contains a "gap," and the subject of the matrix clause is understood to fill it. i.e., the sentences contain these propositions:
Another variant of the construction is one where the subject noun phrase of the complement clause is omitted, and so is for, as in:
These types of sentences are always interpreted with the copula subject being the object or (prepositional object) of the complement clause, and NOT the subject of the complement clause, even though the subject is left unspecified. Due to this restriction, complement clauses cannot contain an intransitive verb. All of the following sound very odd:
Therefore I would differ with the other responders who say that the passive voice version is OK, since passives are intransitives. (Note that a variant of the construction can have the copula subject as a transitive subject of the complement clause, e.g., |
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