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I am unsure where the calendar changes came from. Myself nor the client picked up on any calendar changes (#5).  Also, pay deposit process is optional so that's not included.
Calendar changes (#5) In the presentation doc they have given Move/Switch requirements according to that we have to check our calender logic (NO HOLIDAYS/WEEKENDS! conditions for Bounce) and switch and move verbiage changes.
Do we need to call pay deposit function ? As we understood by documentation we have two condition one is pay deposit and second is pay deposit not required. if pay deposit is required we need to call this function, otherwise it will give error verbiage "deposit required". We have to implement this page with functionality or not please confirm and let us know. 


Can you state why the deposit due page(#1) is 2 hours and the pages service address (#6) and ID mismatch (#7) are 5 hours each?  I understand the service address function as something that confirms the service address isn't already a customer.  I don't know what ID match/mismatch is.
Deposit due page (#1) we have to design a new page for this and we have to write the condition for checking provider id or rep (bounce), based on rep we are going to figure out it belongs to which service provider.
service address (#6) we have to write a new function for Bounce api to check if address is already in service or not, we have to check it on corresponding function in API and response verbiage for  this.(verify address is already exists or not), we have to write condition for checking provider id or rep (bounce).
ID mismatch (#7) we have to Write a code for match conditions for BOUNCE ID match or ID mismatch From XML response (we have to check submit order function from API

<id_validate>validated</id_validated> 
<id_valdiated>nomatch</id_validated> 

"ID mismatch" is used to confirm identity of customer system for checking customers name and SSN.
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