Consider the following:
The response time of a service depends on the network traffic,
The response time of a service dependant on the network traffic.
Which is correct?
closed as general reference by MετάEd, Matt Эллен♦, JSBձոգչ, Lynn, Mahnax Aug 22 '12 at 5:21
This question is too basic; it can be definitively and permanently answered by a single link to a standard internet reference source designed specifically to find that type of information.If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
Your first sentence is correct, while your second one is incorrect or incomplete.
Your second statement maybe rewritten as follow: