My English grammar is rusty and I have not kept up with grammar rules. So, please bear with me, while I struggled to frame the title of my question. What I want accomplished is a paragraph that is short, sweet and one that does not confuse the reader with repetitive detail. I get the feeling that my sentences below could be framed better. I have the following paragraph:
**To start building the system, begin with a phrase or one sentence summary that defines the system. “The Heat system models a two-dimensional heat diffusion experiment” - This one-sentence summary characterizes your system. **
I am going to be using the above paragraph in a Powerpoint slide. So, I want something that conveys the idea quickly.I am aware that I am using either some form of narrative (first, second or third person??)
Any help in making it better is welcomed. Sorry if I have not done my research very well.