Someone edited my message on StackOverflow, but it really bugs me out.
I'm not sure what's wrong with it:
As you see, the bigger the circle becomes, the more vertices I need for hiding the straight lines.
As you see, the bigger the circle becomes, the more vertices I need to hide the straight lines.
The latter (corrected) sentence just bugs me out for some reason. It would sound better if there was a comma after the word "need", perhaps, but I guess that would be even worse in means of grammatical correctness.
Can someone explain why is the first sentence bad and the second sentence correct? And could there even be better solution to fix the first sentence?