I have a quick question about the atypical grammar of mine. I am a poet using iambic pentameter. The question is whether the following is grammatically correct:
I she loathes. That I loathe.
Something + someone + loathe. (The someone loathes something). In other words, she loathes me and I loathe that. It would indeed be the same as saying:
She loathes me. I loathe that.
I understand that it would be better to use the second example, yet my only goal is to play with grammar (as long as it's not too much).