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When describing an experiment (inside a thesis paper), I want to explain that we took a sample and did two things to it, but not together, rather as two separate experiments.

One way to write it is :

We took the sample and either did X to it, or did Y to it.

Another way is:

We took the sample and did X to it, and separately did Y to it.

Frankly I'm not happy with either forms. What's a good way to write this?

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If you would be more precise as to what X and Y are, it would be better (as the answer depends on what actions X and Y are). –  user20934 Jun 2 '12 at 12:53
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Sample taking is pretty much assumed, so no need to emphasize that at the start of your sentence. How about something like: "Samples were subjected to Kjeldahl analysis or Multiplex polymerase chain reaction followed by capillary electrophoresis"?

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This seems like a sensible approach. OP has tied himself up in knots by starting with a sample - which makes it awkward to say what was done next, since different things were done with different parts of the sample. Just call them samples right from the start. –  FumbleFingers Jun 2 '12 at 15:08
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...with a comma after "analysis", if the capillary electrophoresis was done only on those subjected to Multiplex polymerase chain reaction...otherwise, a comma after "reaction" would be helpful. –  JeffSahol Jun 2 '12 at 16:42
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We did X to the sample in one experiment and Y to it in another.

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It is unclear from the example sentences how the sample was treated. One might more clearly say something like the following:

We did X to the sample, and then did Y to that result.
We did X to part of the sample, and Y to another part.
Separate portions of a sample were given treatment X or treatment Y.

You could prefix "After taking the sample," or "A sample was taken and" to the above if for some reason you wish to emphasize that a sample was taken, but otherwise could leave the sample-taking as an implied fact.

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